Date: 31 Jan 2018 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 50
Another excellent story. Sad ending though.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
Date: 22 Mar 2016 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
awesome little story looking forward to reading the sequel thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 08 Dec 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Fantastic chapter!
Date: 08 Dec 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter!
Date: 11 May 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
lollollol Bella is a wildcat!!! i love it
Date: 04 Feb 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 50
What a great read! Thank u! Looking forward to the sequel. :o)
Date: 22 Dec 2014 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 50
Great story
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Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 50
THANKS FOR WRITING THIS STORY. AND CANT WAIT FOR THE REST OFF IT .....
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Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 50
; ) im interested to see where this will go, there are so many different directions you could take in the sequal.
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Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 50
Excellent job!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 50
They have to be hiding Emmett somewhere else? I will be looking forward to the sequel. When is Ellipse start?
Author's Response:
Hopefully this week. I feel really ill right now and hope I've not caught a bug. If I have it won't start till i'm better x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 49
Poor Rose where is Emmett he was not in on it
Date: 14 Dec 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 50
Great drabble. I rarely get to read this side of 'Bella'. Good thing my stomach was empty while reading::)) I'll be looking forward to the sequel. Thanks for sharing
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Thank you very much for your reviews and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 49
"Unless I saw his body then I refused to accept he was dead" Considering how mindlessly impulsive Bella is, I don't agree with much she does or wants to do but I agree with this one!
Date: 14 Dec 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 48
Popping out an eyeball! Nice::)) omg!
Date: 14 Dec 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 50
I am having a hard time with the fact that it was the main characters that were evil and killed. It is the first time I read a story like that.
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Its good to be different x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 50
Poor Bella.
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Thank you very much for your reviews and your support and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 49
aww poor Rose. Her sperm donor died to easy.
Date: 14 Dec 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 50
Thank you so very much for this fiction! It was the first thing I checked for whenI checked my e-mail each day and you made every chapter worth the wait! I look forward to the sequal when you're ready. Like Bella, I just have a feeling Emmett's still out there! Kudos on a masterful piece of fiction.
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Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
I have loved your reviews. You make my stories sound good hehe. I am thrilled you looked forward to updates so much. x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 50
loved this story. Looking forward to the second instalment
Date: 14 Dec 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 50
good
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Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 50
He said he loved her! With all the bad crap going on and the story ending :(. That was a perfect light to end it on. I still hope Emmet is alive.
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Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 49
I was so hoping she & Emmet were alive.
Date: 14 Dec 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 50
Love it, i have a feeling emmetts alive, but i hope not since his wifes dead and he probably watched her be brutalized, and i wouldnt want to see emmett in pain.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 14 Dec 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 49
Superb! I did not see that coming for even an instant! I figured Rose and Emmett would be together - either dead or alive. Please tell me the betrayal isn't Emmett betraying his wife and sister in order to gain control of "his territory" and have his father taken out cleanly by someone else - in this case, Bella. Could he have killed Rose believing her to be unfaithful? My God, my head is spinning with possibilities! This was absolutely mind-bending! Kudos!
Date: 13 Dec 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 48
She continues to shock me. I start to think she is going to be compliant and then she goes and plucks an eyeball!
Date: 13 Dec 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 48
She has big brass ball lol
Date: 13 Dec 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 48
Atta girl, Bella! It's only a matter of patience and time. Still, I wonder if they are alive and what's behind this all. I keep. Feeling that I've missed something very big, clue-wise. Excellent chapter! Thank you!!
Date: 13 Dec 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMFNG!!! WOW! Bella is crazy!! I love her!! I have so many thoughts of what "the bigger plan" is! :)
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Thank you very much for your review and for taking this journey with me. It means more to me than words can say. I'm glad you liked the story x x x
Date: 13 Dec 2014 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 48
oh Jasper....you are a wanker are'nt you. Yea i'd be wary of that address too. probably heavy armed/covered
Date: 13 Dec 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 47
I may skip read on the torture. Ugh.. I love Mafia stories just torture is hard for me.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 47
Maybe I'm beating a dead horse & as crazy as it sounds, I still have doubts that Jasper is what they think he is. Maybe it's wishful thinking:)
Date: 12 Dec 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 47
I sincerely hope Carlisle is as understanding with and cares about Bella as much as he seems to. She could use a Dad in her life, one who respects her and loves her completely. As for Jasper, it would be fascinating to know why he betrayed Emmett and Bella and Rosalie. Power? Money? Position?
I do love this story! It has every element needed to engross its readers. Thank you for such a gift, and as I wrote, if there's a sequal, I'll be there waiting to inhale it!
Date: 12 Dec 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 47
oooooh....Jasper's gonna get it now.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 47
Wonder if Jasper will just tell them everything since he knows he gonna die anyway. Maybe they'll just kill him and not torture him. Not sad to see her sperm donor dead that's for sure. Hope Emmett is ok and just hiding somewheres.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 47
Carlisle knows a good thing when he sees it and he sees it in Bella.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 47
Sad this is almost over :(. HAPPY that there will be a sequel! :D
Date: 12 Dec 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 46
good she killed him. i wonder who was next to take over for him.
Date: 11 Dec 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 46
I must say, Bella has guts! She knows what she needs to do and does it. If it were a "Power - gun" thing, she would never have simply handed. It to Edward. Now let's hope that Jasper cracks!! Wonderful chapter! Thank you so much!
Date: 11 Dec 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 46
That wasn't as bad as I was expecting but now I'm even more a little worried bc what does jasper have up his sleeve?
Date: 11 Dec 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 46
Well at least her sperm donor is dead.
Date: 11 Dec 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 46
I hope Edward thinks she is right one evil down
Date: 11 Dec 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 46
OMG! WOW! She really did it! Good for her! ;) I love this story!! :)
Date: 11 Dec 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 45
Can she be that lucky....
Date: 11 Dec 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 45
I hope she did. Thanks for the update :)
Date: 10 Dec 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 45
OH WHAT WILL SHE DO ...... :D CANT WAIT TO GET NEXT UPDATE .... LOL
Date: 10 Dec 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 45
Oh CRAP! This is a HUGE cliffie! I was so happy to see this update and now I'm going to have to hope I don't chew all my nails off until tomorrow hopefully with the next update.....
Date: 10 Dec 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 45
Ugh they picked the house her sperm donor was in? how unlucky. I'd want him dead too.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 45
OH MY GOD! I LOVE THIS! :)
Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 45
I dont think she like her dad
Date: 09 Dec 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 44
Interesting story
Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 44
OMG! I LOVE THIS!! I couldn't stop reading it once I started. So, now I am all caught up and waiting for more!!! This is so fantastic!! :)