Date: 07 Jun 2015 6:56 PM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
I never have cared for Rosalie's self-righteous attitude, and this story doesn't change my thinking at all! Whatever went on in that house between the two of them, no one will ever really know, but I find it incredibly sad!
Author's Response:
Title: Tell-Tale Heart
What actually happened with Bella and Edward has been left up to the reader's imagination.
But I could see Rosalie thinking the absolute worst. And I meant it *bend* it in that direction.
Thank you for reading and for taking time to write a review.
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2014 2:11 PM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
WOOH! Speehless.....Don't know how to feel about this story. Deep!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you!
I was hoping to fill in the creep factor without being graphically gruesome. (cuz I just can't do that.) Can't even watch horror movies.
Thanks for reading and for your review!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Date: 27 Oct 2014 5:49 AM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
grr..
Author's Response:
Hello!
Yeah, "grrr" is one way of putting it.
I could SO see Edward doing that.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Date: 26 Oct 2014 9:47 PM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
Extremely freaky
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was going for creepy and freaky without being graphic.
Thanks for reading!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Date: 26 Oct 2014 8:07 PM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
Wow bella was find died and edward too I guess there more to story then they knew. Because no one had seen edward in 60 year. What happened there did edward keep bella as a captive all years? I guess that is the question isn't it. You lefty a mystery to be solved too which people love.
Author's Response:
Hello!
Yes, as I see it, Edward captured her not long after the Cullens heard she had jumped off the cliff. He held her as a prisoner for the rest of her life.
Thanks for reading and for reviewing!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Date: 26 Oct 2014 1:27 AM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
That was a wonderful story. Got me in the Halloween mood.
Author's Response:
Tell-Tale Heart
Oh good! And there wasn't even any blood. But I hope it was creepy enough.
Thanks for your review!
Rick - Mizzrick - GeezerWench
Date: 26 Oct 2014 12:46 AM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
Outstandingly brilliant! You bring your readers along through the house, room by room, curiosity by curiosity, mystery by mystery until the smash at the end. Perfection! In. Many ways it reminds me of Poe's "Cask of Amontillado". The journey is the story! Kudos and thank you for a marvelous read!
P.S. You realize you're going to have many readers begging you to go back and relive Bella's life there with Edward in every detail!? You must admit it could be a doozy!! The kind bends!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Happyghost was a big help.
"You realize you're going to have many readers begging you to go back and relive Bella's life there with Edward in every detail!?"
I sort of have bits of it in my head, but I wouldn't be able to write it. Don't think I could get my head in Bella's in that kind of situation. Or in Edward's. Or in that kind of place. Some people can really write that kind of thing. I mean, put you right there.
I can't.
It crossed my mind, but I gotta stick within my limitations. I wanted to write a Halloween story, but I just can't do horror. Can't even watch horror movies.
Hopefully, I gave enough information that people can fill in the details in their own minds.
Seems to have worked, for the most part.
Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 10:42 PM Title: Tell-Tale Heart
a sad story but i love it
Author's Response:
Hello!
Thank you, Sweetie!