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Reviewer: Le Kitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2012 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

This story is amazing. Infact, I'd go as far as saying that it's one of the best that I've read. However, after reading the end, I'm left with wanting more. I do hope that you'd consider and maybe even go through with writing a sequel to this story.

On a side note, I must say you're a talented writer. Keep writing!

Reviewer: ECullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love the story so far update soon.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

Haha lol love Em's threat!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: pinkb3lla30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

More please

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

perfect and i love how sam gave her permission to love again



Author's Response:

thanks! And tecnically he told her to love again in chapter 2, but she needed some reminding.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, cool chapter. Hope you update some more soon



Author's Response:

thanks! I will do my best to update soon.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9

Such a good chapter. :-D

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 9

love it but alice is a little strange but i cant wait for more

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

So so adorable. I really love this story. : )

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

can't wait until Bella and Jasper get together

 

Reviewer: Lourdes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

I´m loving this story!

 

what is Alice problem?  is she angry because Bella´s power messes with her power?

 

please update soon

=)



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you're loving this story! And only one person so far commented without asking about Alice, although a few people have come up with the same theory as you. But I'll tell you wait I told them...you're just gonna have to wait to find out.

Reviewer: badrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 6

I have an idea as to why Alice is angry.



Author's Response:

Do you? I'm very curious to hear your theory. So far I've heard two. I'd like to know yours too, but you don't have to say if you don't want to. There should be more up tomorrow though, but it might be a bit before we get to Alice's reasoning.

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ilove this story. Please continue it. You are doing a great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so happy you love this story and that you think I'm doing a great job. You've made my day. More will be coming soon, probably friday since the polls are closing Thursday. (if you wish to vote for who Bella's mate should be, instructions have been posted in the chapter notes at the beginning of chapter 6)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Really good chapter. Can't wait to find out what's pissed Alice off. Hope you update more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! More will come soon, probably the end of the week because I'm closing the votes for Bella's mate on thursday (instructions can be found at the top of chapter 6 now if you wanna vote) And you will definitely be finding out what's pissed alice off soon enough.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

i want her to be with Jasper. forget me comment a minute ago



Author's Response:

I totally giggled when I saw this. Can I ask what changed your mind though?

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

love it. is edward going to be bella's mate

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is such an amazing story. It had me tearing up but i can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: pinkb3lla30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

*sniff,sniff does some got a hanky* that was so sad

Author's Response:

It was sad. Bella just kind of took over that chapter and wrote her own story. But I did warn you in the beginning that you might need some tissues. And thank you for the rating. It's nice to see five little cups of coffee whenever I check for new reviews.

Reviewer: lovesam Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

that was soooo cute! i love that emmett and bella found each other again!

Reviewer: badrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

Update soon! I Can't wait for more! I hope Jazzy and Bella end up together 

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