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Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 11:10 AM Title: Preface

Interesting start : we don't know who are the characters. They could be anyone...

There just seemed to be an error for me about what she wears :
- in the beginning she seems to have pants "Underneath the coat, she wore dark, denim jeans that clung to her like a second skin, with a T-shirt on the top half. "

- in the alley she has a skirt "He still hadn’t moved the knife away from her throat, when he demanded she pull up her skirt and get out of her knickers. "

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2014 2:01 AM Title: Preface

poor thing

noone shoud have to go through this

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 4:26 AM Title: Preface

Interesting start.....looking forward to where you take your story :)

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