Date: 31 Oct 2015 10:57 AM Title: Epilogue
Of course Iliked it, I always love a happy ending! Everyone got their happy ever after, except Alice, of course!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Crazy Alice, trying to get all she could, a man and money! Sure didn't work out too well for her!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Surely Kate wouldn't have killed her own mother! Who else would wear orange lipstick? I'm stumped!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Jasper, what a life! Carlisle and Alice were two peas in a pod, the way they treated people! Must have been genetic! I'm quite glad he's dead, he certainly deserved it!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, motives and secrets galore! Now they will be after Esme, she is the perfect suspect! Then poor Jane will be an orphan! I still don't believe she did either murder!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh sure, wait until most of her friends are out of touch and grill Esme about Carlisle's muder, and probably Carmen's also! I really don't think she did it!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
Guess it would be helpful to know what Jasper thinks Alice did. Too bad about Carmen, she must have seen something she wasn't meant to see!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
What in the world has happened to Kate's mother? And, what is in the bag tossed onto the roof?
Date: 31 Oct 2015 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Kate must be crazy if she thinks Edward would have anything to do with her! Maybe listening to all the gossips will help the truth to come out!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
It would certainly help to find the glasses and possible fingerprints. Maybe Jane has a secret hiding place that the killer used!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
Maybe Carlisle wasn't so rotten after all, leaving the house and some money to Esme! I'll bet Alice is about to pitch a really big fit over that news!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Sounds like Edward is about to become a detective, with the help of Mrs. Webber. I'm curious as to why Jasper is avoiding Alice. Did her tantrums become too much for him?
Date: 31 Oct 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sjure, Jacob wants Edward to be guilty because he doesn't want him having anything to do with Bella! He will always be ready to think the worst of Mr. Masen, being that he's jealous of him.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is definitely going to be a tough investigation!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Looks as if Carlisle was a worse person than I thought he was, since someone killed him! This should be a circus what with all the possible suspects!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
Carlisle and Alice are quite the pair! I couldn't stand to put up with either one of them! Most of the people at this party are pretty awful!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
The path of true love never runs smooth! Seems like I read that once upon a time and this story will no doubt prove it so! Tanya and Carlisle are glad to divorce so I wonder if they each have a new partner in mind?
Author's Response:
Wow! That phrase is so true.
Hmm, well, you have to keep reading ;) You'll be surprised.
Thank you for reading my story, this one is my favorite baby. I hope you like it.
Date: 30 Oct 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Gossiping women, only surpassed by men doing the exact same thing!
Author's Response:
Yeah, in Forkshire they were ready to proclaim gossip as the regional sport. They should have a hobby ;)
Date: 30 Oct 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
I just love how these people are planning other people's lives for them, without consulting the interested parties! I wonder, too, why Aro dislikes Carlisle?
Author's Response:
It wasn't only expected, but they were supposed to embrace it O_o
Date: 30 Oct 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, this already sounds intriguing, what with all the snobbery and backbiting from Carmen and Kate! I would bet Carlisle doesn't know his wife is cheating on him, either!
Author's Response:
Oh my! I really hope you like it. Just let's say that not everything is as it seems ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2015 2:06 PM Title: Epilogue
thank you so much for completing and posting this AWESOME!!! story on here for us ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for taking the time to read it. You made my day :)
May
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2015 10:33 PM Title: Epilogue
:) Loved this story
Date: 16 Jan 2015 3:44 AM Title: Epilogue
Love the happy ending. Too bad Alice through murder would help her, I hope she regretted everything in the end. But then again you don't always get what you want in life.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, I guess Alice couldn't live with the regrets; but the others got their happy ending, even people like Kate who really needed just a push into the right direction.
Thanks so much for reading and sharing your opinion with me.
May
Date: 16 Dec 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tanya sure doesn't like been married to Carlisle.
Author's Response:
Hi! I want to thank you for reading the whole fic and reviewing. I'm glad to hear from you.
Now that you finished, you know why she really doesn't like it.
May
Date: 16 Dec 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Both edward and bella sure like each other but Carlisle looks angry he must be mess-up.
Author's Response:
I love when Edward and Bella find each other in the beginning of a story. There's something magical, or I like to think of it that way
May
Date: 16 Dec 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
Alice sure took a turn for the worse she lose her mind.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think Alice is the killer.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm sure there are a lot of people how wanted kill Carlisle but hey he gone now so he in hell where he belong. Alice she knew how to go below the belt.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
Esme sure get in too deep with Carlisle but at least he left his daughter and esme the house.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
There more to the murders of Carmen and Carlisle someone how hate them both so badly.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
Carmen died so how could the killer be. Alice she not brightest person jasper want uneven to did with her.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Kate sure is dumb edward Doesn't love her get over it.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
It Kate I bet.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
WoW some will he left behind. Sure that was a shocker.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Still a lot of mystery to the murder. Yet not many clues.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jacob sure is stupid and Seth is nice I like him better then jacob.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Tanya Doesn't know the only reason Carlisle agree to a divorce because he wanted bella.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Carlisle dead so how killed him everyone must have reason to kill should a heartless man.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alice sure know how act her age being a bitch get you no where bet Carlisle wishes he where somewhere else about now.
Author's Response:
Well, with that father, she was bound to be immature.
May
Date: 15 Dec 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have a bad feeling about Carlisle I don't think he a nice guy maybe an evil bastard if you know what I mean.
Author's Response:
You have a really good eye to get who's going to be the evil character, in all my stories you get them right away. :)
May
Date: 15 Dec 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like everyone is in everybody's business there.
Author's Response:
Yeah. I love Agatha Christie's stories and also Father Brown mysteries. Most happen in England in little towns, and people is always in each other businesses. I find it funny, because it is like that here in Mexico
May
Date: 14 Dec 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
It was good. Looked like an Agatha Christie mystery.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm a fan of Agatha Christie and I wanted to do a little mystery tale.
May
Date: 13 Dec 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
yay!...i was right! woot, woot!
Author's Response:
Yeah, tequila shots for you and me!
I didn't tell you because I would had spoiled the end, but congrats to you for guessing the killer!
May
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
WHO!?!?!? Dang now i'm going to be in suspense until next update
Author's Response:
Hi! The enxt chapter will be posted on friday.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
May
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
my guess is Alice. :D
Author's Response:
I wish I could tell... next chapter will be posted on friday :)
Thanks for reading and commenting.
May
Date: 27 Nov 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
what a web..
Pumpkin Pie. If you can buy canned pumpkin buy Eagle Brand Milk and pumpkin pie spice. Use the recipe on the can of Pumpkin. Buy frozen pie shells. It is an easy pie.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'll try to find that brand. I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving.
May :)
Date: 07 Nov 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love the story, but you could really use a proofreader. Please consider it. Incorrect word usage, misspelled words and incomplete sentences make a story hard to read and enjoy.
Date: 06 Nov 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Of course you can't
Author's Response:
I'm sure you know something... ;)
May
Date: 04 Nov 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Girl Bye! Like Edward would fall for that hahahahaha you are a idiot Kate
Author's Response:
You're going to love the next chapter... with Edward's answer to Kate.
Thank you :)
May
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
WOW!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
May
Date: 22 Oct 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well Alice has to share with Mommie Dearest and Esme. She also has to move out of the house. LOL
Author's Response:
Oh yeah! She won't be a happy camper :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I apreciate your comments.
May
Date: 22 Oct 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Puzzle pieces.. hmm
Author's Response:
Yes, everything is a bit messy for now. :)
May
Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am slightly lost on this chapter. Makes me want to go back and she what I forgot. Who is the Blonde in Edward's room? Why did she go in there when he was not there/
Author's Response:
You're not lost, the identity of the blond woman is still a mystery. Soon everybody will find out.
May
Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good story. I had to stop and think where we were. Just keep updating quickly that is all I ask. :-)
Author's Response:
Hi! I hope to post more frequently now that I finished one of my stories.
May
Date: 21 Oct 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
oooh...things are really heating up now....
i see Helen as one of Agatha Christies' character. Ms Marple, perhaps?
Author's Response:
Yes! I love Miss Marple and I wanted someone like her. Virtual cookies to you for guessing it.
May
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hate to say it but now Carlisle can not force himself on Bella.
Author's Response:
But you're right, Carlisle demise will be beneficial for many people besides Bella.
And Bella has a bit of a temper, she probably would have fought him.
:) May
PS: I really want to thank you for supporting me and commenting in my stories.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alice is a pain.. Jasper must have run off.. smart guy
Author's Response:
Yes, Alice is really hateful; but Jasper has a lot going on, soon you will meet him ;)
May
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Twig in the woods? Who? Kate is after Edward and he does not want her.
Author's Response:
I'm afraid this person identity will remain secret for a bit ;)
Kate had carried a torch for Edward for a while.
May
Date: 21 Sep 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
what a nasty bunch.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but Didyme's idea was to get 'information' and sadly, they are the best source.
May
Date: 21 Sep 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
In this chapter you have given us enough information to start forming opinions. Seems these people are pretty catty, the lot of them. I think Ms Platt is your best bet for true information. Alice is nosy.
Author's Response:
Yes, this chapter presented some of the less nice people in town.
May
Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Finally someone slapped that brat
Author's Response:
Yes, Didyme is really proud of that slap. :)
May
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
loved this chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh what an amazing story. I am really liking this version. It's not often to find such a different approach since so many version of the same stories I've read. TYVM.
Author's Response:
thanks to you. Your comment made me smile in the middle of an stressful day :)
Date: 06 Sep 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really enjoy your depth of characterization and the story so far. Tiny grammar problems here and there, but that is well overlooking in comparison to the story itself. It's wonderful so far and I look forward to more! Thank you for your hard work!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun. I really appreciate your comment.
Date: 31 Aug 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to read more. Loved it!
What is posting day/days?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm trying to post once a week, probably on weekends.
:) May
Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome! Really liked it! Thanks for sharing! Please continue soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, you made my Sunday. :)
Date: 22 Aug 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start! Would love to read more! Please continue soon! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for reading. :)
Date: 17 Aug 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Like the premise and the story so far. Pleaseconsider getting a beta or a helper for the grammar; the grammatical errors arevery distracting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I'm working with someone, I hope the next chapters will get better. :)