Date: 13 Oct 2022 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can you please add a new chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2022 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Itβs been a wile since you updated but I still reread this story love it hopefully you will continue writing it you still fans reading your story hope you are doing good and thank you
Date: 23 Jul 2021 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
When will the next chapter be out?
Date: 13 Sep 2020 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Such a good story. I really hope you will complete this.
Date: 13 Sep 2020 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ummm does he not realize she isn’t a child anymore? I’d go ahead and graduate early and leave! Good story so far.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2018 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
π Thank you so much for sharing your story - I really enjoyed reading it so far. If you ever decide to share more, it will be a much appreciated bonus. Thank you. π€—
Date: 20 Dec 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
Cliffhanger I can't wait to read the rest of what Will happen with Jasper and Bella?
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Noooo, please don't just drop us here; this fic is far too delicious! b25;b25;b25;
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love that he inadvertently marked her, and where he marked her... ohhh *swoon*
Jasper's POV on this event was impeccable.
Date: 02 Oct 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loving your story and can't wait to read more!
Date: 25 Sep 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love the intimacy of their thoughts and feelings added in here. Wonderful!
Date: 06 Sep 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh my god what a chapter one of the best lemons ive seen a while every hot ..i think i need a fan now..lol keep it up great work
Author's Response:
Wow, I didn't think anyone was still reading this. I'm glad you like it sorry I have not up dated. My PC crashed and I lost the story. Along with the chapters I had written and had not yet posted. Between that and my crazy schedule I haven' t had time. Will let you know that I have started working on it again and hope to have an update soon. Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait to read more! I love a Jasper Bella story!
Date: 07 Dec 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it update soon
Date: 30 Nov 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Simply luscious! Jasper's connection takes even him by surprise, I think! Loved it and look forward to more! Thank you!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it! You show us the beginning of a new relationship and absolute, unadulterated bliss and pleasure. Wonderfully done! Kudos! What could have seemed made up and shallow, you have allowed us to see the true depth of feeling these two have for one another. Thank you for all the effort and trouble taken to make this whole story just right!
Author's Response:
Thank you, as I stated at the beginning of my story I have never written for others to read. And never taken someone elses work and restoried it. I am enjoying the oppertunity though. To know others are enjoying it is heart warming.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nope. i don't think there's any going back to Alice : )
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
You did NOT stop there! Aargh! Meanie!
Author's Response:
so,so sorry have to go to work now
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can't wait for more
Date: 08 Nov 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow Bella! Really enjoying your story!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope that I will be able to do frequent updates.
Date: 18 Oct 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Is this a Jasper/Bella or Jared/Bella.... Just wondering on the pairing and I hope you update more soon :)
Author's Response:
It's Jasper/Bella, I have fixed the pairing. First time and all, so some mistakes are to be expected. Got a new computer so should be able to update more often. Could not write or post on my Ipad.
Date: 12 Aug 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
That's a really stupid lie!! Why would she make herself look bad to her father?
Author's Response:
Were you ever a teen. All lies are stupid. She is trying to insure that their secret stays just that. She would rather look bad to her dad, then take the chance that he could find out the truth and be killed.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
I was enjoying this story so much I didn't want to stop and review! Sorry! I love your Jasper and Bella and look forward to reading more! They are a true team! The naturalness that Jasper feels with Bella is unlike any he has ever know before! Wonderfully romantic and loving!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will Bella be getting over her need to use gay slurs anytime soon? Granted high schoolers are immature. Some of the terms are just disgusting. Liked the story otherwise. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. To be honest I have to remember to put them in. LOL. I have a neice who keeps telling me that at that age if Bella didn't bash Edward it wouldn't be believable. Yes, she will be getting over it soon. She is currently mad and doesn't have the opportunity to take her anger out on him, so yes she is being immature and bad mouthing him. However, I can't say that I have ever really been a Edward fan as you can see I paired Bella with Jasper so I'm ok with a little bad mouthing. I'm happy you like the story as stated in the beginning I have never written anything for others to read so this makes me a bit nervous.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm looking forward to finding out what Jasper's reaction to Bella'a stories is. It should be interesting.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like it so far. Can't wait for more. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the encouragement, I have never written anything intended for others to read so I wasn't sure anyone would like it. I'll try to update at least one chapter a day except on weekends as that is the only time I see my husband.