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Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 3:57 PM Title: Cognoscere

So sensual, nice!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 3:11 PM Title: Instare

Way to go B & E. Sorry for your loss Lauren, lol. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

So sweet and passionate. Poor Edward, his past unforgivable.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 2:21 PM Title: Outtake: Caesula

OMG.  I would like her dead... and not by natural causes. How terrible/awful for Edward.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Ardere

Yes! Sweet, love it.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Dedere

Too bad he didn't kill him.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Reperire

Sweet, finally.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Concremare

Sad about Charlie. 

 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Incendere

Anticipation 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Inflammare

Enjoying

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 23

Your Fic came to me as recommended. I've thoroughly enjoyed it and hope you will continue writing it. I thought it was a completed work so I was bummed that it wasn't complete. So the wait begins...

thanjs fir sharing your talent.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

That was so sweet, I just wanted to hug them both!Edward might as well start thinking along the same lines as Bella, because she's not going to let it go, about changing her! It wouldn't hurt for him to be just a tad selfish and keep her with him forever!



Author's Response:

Lol, they did have a kind of wonderful/terrible day, the poor kids.

I agree with you abt changing Bella. We shall see what Edward thinks... ;)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 5:53 PM Title: Imminere

The combination of Victoria and James will be more than enough to deal with now! I wonder if Edward will think more about Jasper's suggestion of turning Bella? It sure would be one way to protect her from a lot of dangers!



Author's Response:

Mmmmmm....he might!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

Some other vampire was there, below them I'm almost certain! Probably Victoria or James, about to make trouble! Just when Bella was making progress, too!



Author's Response:

There is some other vampire, but I'm not telling. Fortunately, the next chapters are up! Thanks for reviewing! xo

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 12:28 AM Title: Confidere

Very brave of Bella to declare her love for Edward, especially without hearing the words from him first! Of course we already know Bella is a bit ahead of her time, being raised by her forward-thinking mother! I'm glad she has convinced Edward it's natural for her to love him, and not a result of some "vampire magnetism"!



Author's Response:

lol, it was a tough sell, but he finally believes her. He did tell her he loved her, back in the meadow, and once or twice since. Thanks for your comments, as always. Mwah! - Linda

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Comburere

No relief from Victoria's predations, it seems. She picked the wrong victim this time, since Carlisle seems to have n o pity for her! I'm curious as to how Edward and Carlise came to be together  and for how long? If Victoria hasn't envenomated Esme, surely Carlisle won't let her go back to that animal of a husband, only to be beaten again?



Author's Response:

Good questions - you'll have answers very soon!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I enjoy hearing them!

-Linda

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Historical Note

Thank you for the historical notes, I found them interesting, but not necessary. I guess some people are a bit on the picky side, or else have never paid much attention to history! I never found anything objectional in what Edward and Bella did with each other!



Author's Response:

Thanks for saying so! But yeah, some people thought it was wacky, so I figured I'd address it. I'm trying to keep things appropriate for the time as much as I can.

xo, Linda

Reviewer: Munchkin85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

This is a great story. Can't wait for more. Your writing skills are impressive. Please update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The updates are up to chapter 23 now. :)

Thank you for reviewing! xo Linda

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

good story. thank you



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for reviewing! - Linda

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

Beautiful 



Author's Response:

Thank you! xo

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 17

I think Alice is correct and Bella has made a momentous decision. She and Edward shared a wonderful day, including the time with Mrs. Bundy, and it no doubt cemented her thinking about Edward!



Author's Response:

Almost entirely correct! Tomorrow is another day... ;)

Thank you for reviewing! - Linda

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2014 7:34 AM Title: Cognoscere

Oh, if only things could be as sweet and lovely for them always! However, I know that won't happen, so I'll adjust my seatbelt and hang on for the ride!



Author's Response:

Sweet and lovely wouldn't make much of a story, though...we'd have to say "Hapilly Ever After, The End." ;)  But I know what you mean. :)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: clementine49 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 4:10 AM Title: Cognoscere

This story has been such a wonderful surprise!  I am loving both Edward and Bella -- the layerers of the story go from sweet to romantic to scary to mysterious.  I can't wait to read what happens next.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! I especially appreciate what you said about it having layers - that makes it challenging, but also great fun to write. Thank you so much for reviewing. It means the world, in part because it's the only way authors have of knowing anyone is reading! ;)  You're one of the good ones! xo

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:56 AM Title: Cognoscere

Love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! You're such a dear to review every chapter. It makes me smile to know that you're still reading. :)

-Linda

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 9:08 AM Title: Instare

The plot thickens, indeed! It had to happen, I suppose, that evil Victoria would meet up with evil James Hunter, and she would change him for a newborn companion! This, I'm sure will become a danger to Bella and Edward's future happiness! I shudder to think of the possibilities!



Author's Response:

Yes, Victoria and James were in cahoots long before Hunter ran into Bella at the boarding house. Victoria must have a soft spot for him, to follow him all the way to Sacramento and agree to change him. Definitely trouble. ;)

Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 6:56 AM Title: Instare

Amazed

Reviewer: Munchkin85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loving this so far. Can't wait for more

Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story! Chapter 15 is up, and 16 is nearly finished. :)

Thank you so much for taking time to review - it really inspires the writing!

xo, Linda (Cullenboyz)

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love it. So beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: saleyjo Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

Just wanted you to know that I have really enjoyed reading your story.  Look forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thank you for taking time to review! Chapter 15 is up, and 16 is well under way. :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope his passionate declaration has allayed Bella's fears! She seems to have no trouble hearing Edward's past, except for sympathy over what hurt him! Now that Alice and Jasper have joined the Cullens, I hope Bella visits soon!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 1:44 AM Title: Outtake: Caesula

It's such a foreign concept  to Americans, but in those times, slaves had no rights, even over their own bodies! A sickening thought, but thank heavens one that no longer exists in our country, at least!



Author's Response:

Yes, it was completely acceptable for men to avail themselve of their slaves, male and female. Caesula didn't want Eduardus to tell anyone she'd used him because it was less acceptable for women to do so, largely because (of course) their husbands didn't want them conceiving children with anyone but them. But there are  accounts of women who were like Caesula, sadly.

Thank you for commenting! xo

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 1:32 AM Title: Outtake: Caesula

So sad. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command - new chapter should be up now! ;)

Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Ardere

So beauty 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Ardere

Edward has bared his soul to Bella and I feel she is about to do the same to him!



Author's Response:

We can hope. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! - Linda

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Aperire

Awesome. When ever I finish reading chapters from this story I'm so excited for more.



Author's Response:

!!! That just made my day! Thank you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Aperire

If he's as smart as he's supposed to be, Edward will quickly explain what he does drink, now that Bella has guessed what he is! I think that her horror will disappear when she learns that he does not drink from humans.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Dedere

Now Bella knows a major thing about Edward, and she doesn't care! He has to be somewhat happy about that! It makes sense to her that he saved her from Hunter with those accentuated abilities, so why should she fear them? I'm only sorry that Rose and Esme are taking him to Sacramento alive! I fear he means to return and avenge himself on Bella!Thanks for the late night cup of tea with Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Dedere

Beautiful

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Confidere

That was scary, right up until Edward threw Hunter awayfrom Bella! Too bad he didn't just end the slimeball right then! It's a bigger danger that Victoria is after Bella, but James always gives me the creeps! I hate men that take pleasure from hurting women, and he's the poster child! I'm so glad that Edward is encouraged by Bella's trust!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Confidere

Love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you - that's wonderful to hear! <3

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Reperire

Lol. Love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! That scene was very fun to think of and write. I love Bella falling on her ass in surprise. :D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Reperire

That little scenario was funny as well as startling!  I'm already not a fan of Aunt Katherine, she sounds mean and sour, with a dash of cruelty thrown in for good measure! I'm also very concerned about this new boarder, James Hunter, who just might be a vampire and in league with Victoria! Even if he's human, he won't be a good guy, I'm sure!



Author's Response:

You've been reading over my shoulder, haven't you? lol... but yeah, you're right on the money about everything. Thank you for reviewing! xo

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Aestuere

I was wondering how the fire started,and now we have our answer! Victoria just can't let Edward go or find happiness with another! Too bad the Volturi didn't take her head all those years ago! I hope he finds out soon what the real danger is and who brings it!



Author's Response:

She's a slippery one, that Victoria, though not in the canon way. Edward's going to have a hard time dealing with her!

Thank you for reviewing! xoxo

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Concremare

Poor Bella, losing her beloved father so suddenly! Thankfully Edward was there to save her from the fire! He must have been her angel, breaking in through the glass and leaping with her to safety!  Or, perhaps it was Carlisle?



Author's Response:

:) Time will tell. I love your questions. Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Incendere

Never having experienced it before in his very long life, I can't fault Edward for not recognizing that pull in his chest while apart from Bella. If you have never loved, how are you to know what it feels like? Bless Carlisle for his loving research for Edward! Wonder when their meeting will take place?



Author's Response:

Their meeting is coming soon - Sorry for the slow burn! I'm really loving your comments. I'm glad Edward's reactions make sense to you! Please feel free to let me know if they don't. :) - Linda

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Adolere

Ever willing to sacrifice himself for the good of others. I see. Guess a leopard really doesn't change those spots, much. I do have a question, if she lives a mile out of town, whose door was Bella coming out of when he and Rose saw her ?



Author's Response:

It's not really important to the story, but she was visiting someone - an old lady she helps with her garden. It's mentioned at the end of Chapter 5. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Incendere

Beautiful

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Inflammare

UPDATE SOON.



Author's Response:

Yes, ma'am! :D  Actually, I'm gonna post another one right now. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: tcassata Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Inflammare

Thank you for sharing your story with us.  I really like the first three chapters and am interested to see where the story leads...



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying! I'll be updating at least once a day, then going to twice a week as the chaps get longer. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Inflammare

Can't wait for more

 



Author's Response:

Yay! More is coming today. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2014 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

MORE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Inflammare

Over eighteen hundred years and Edward finally finds his singer, that's a long, long time to wait! Can't wait to hear about who all is here and in the family and why! Washington is about to become a state in the next ten years and was still pretty much the frontier, so I'm happy you chose to get this far in the timeline. As for the missing fifteen hundred or so years in between here and 1192 London, I'm sure anything will be fascinating!



Author's Response:

What a great review - thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! :)   I really enjoy hearing them.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

So, Victoria, of all people! Who would have thought? I loved the threat, and the information that Eduardus knows Carlisle. Wonder what she will tell him, and if it will be enough to save her? I can tell this is going to be a favorite!



Author's Response:

Love that you're "getting" everything! Thank you very much for the reviews! -Linda

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lamia

In a strange way, this unamed vampire has obtained what she/he craved, Eduardus immortal. Thus, somewhere in time and in the world, he will exist and can be found again! Intriguing start to a story.



Author's Response:

You're the first to say so (people are also reading on other sites), and you have it exactly right! Glad you're intrigued. :)

Reviewer: flowliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lamia

I LIKE!!! YOUR OFF TO A GREAT START AND I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review - it means a lot! Gla you're enjoying it so far. :) xo, Linda (Cullenboyz)

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