Date: 28 Oct 2017 2:27 AM Title: The Day After
I like Luke vanilla relationship!
Thinking of how experienced Severine is she knows there is a background file of her. She would also know that her contract with Christian would include no other intimacy with others.
Date: 28 Oct 2017 12:59 AM Title: Tonight, Tonight, Tonight
Awesomness
Date: 12 Mar 2017 2:48 AM Title: The Day After
Can't wait for this to go further!!!!
Date: 06 Feb 2017 3:21 AM Title: Tonight, Tonight, Tonight
FINALLY these 2!!!! Please post more.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 7:47 PM Title: The Arrangement
Yay!! Was so happy to see an update! Very much enjoy this story and the New Orleans background!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2016 1:01 AM Title: The Arrangement
Glad you're back. Your fans wait patiently for updates, like your characters in this story
Date: 25 Jul 2016 1:42 PM Title: Questions and Answers
Life would be even better with an update! (Hint hint)
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 11:24 PM Title: The Arrangement
I liked this take on Christian as a Dom pre-Anastasia. Severine is a very enjoyable and realistic character, quite normal but with a taste for BDSM. I hope you will explore the emotional and psychological reasons that she and Christian are in the BDSM scene. Christian's emotional detachment, coldness in these playroom scenes can be felt at times. He also demonstrates through his acts that he cares for his sub's well-being and security. Excellently well written. You have managed to keep the reader's attention at all times. I look forward to the next chapters. I hope they come soon!
My Best,
Miss Dornan
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:00 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Always happy to read a new chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2015 4:27 AM Title: Weekend's end
Can i get a wkend like that?
Date: 23 Dec 2015 2:34 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Another 6 months... hmmm... This could get interesting
Date: 22 Dec 2015 3:09 AM Title: Questions and Answers
great story! I can't wait for more
Date: 20 Dec 2015 5:56 PM Title: Questions and Answers
Thank you for the update. I'm always excited to see a new chapter
Date: 04 Dec 2015 3:00 AM Title: Home Furnishing
welcome back!
Date: 30 Nov 2015 7:26 PM Title: Home Furnishing
Missed this story. Thank you for the update. Master was a bit cold in this one. Is he going to end their arrangement?
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2015 3:28 PM Title: Home Furnishing
thanks for the update love it but in this ch edward more colder in this ch
Date: 23 Jul 2015 12:30 AM Title: Land of Confusion
Thanks for the new chapter. I am loving this relationship between Severine & Luke, please continue.
Date: 22 Jul 2015 9:34 AM Title: Land of Confusion
So nice to have another chapter. You've beeen missed.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2015 11:03 PM Title: Land of Confusion
Oh you do continue to tease. Thanks for staying with your fans of this story, don't know where it's going or do we?.....
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:27 PM Title: Land of Confusion
thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2015 4:29 PM Title: Land of Confusion
Delighted you're back as I love this story. Such a cold Christian is odd when we're used to stories with Anna but still very interesting. Love the Luke UST. Looking forward to more!
Date: 21 Jul 2015 11:53 AM Title: Land of Confusion
Thanks for the new chapter! If I were her, I would have called home first thing to make sure my parents were OK.
Date: 17 May 2015 3:19 AM Title: Knockout Punch
Oh so glad you are continuing.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2015 5:46 AM Title: Knockout Punch
glad your back can't wait to read what you come up with next
Date: 15 May 2015 2:04 AM Title: Knockout Punch
I've missed you. Welcome back. Thanks for the great chapter, do I see an end in sight for these two?
Date: 14 May 2015 1:06 PM Title: Knockout Punch
Thank you for updating. I've been missing this story a lot.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2015 4:53 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
I love this story. I hope you get the chance to finish it.
As a mother of 4 girls and a wife I know how Real Life
can pull authors from their stories.
I appreciate your commitment to your readers.
Thank you
Warmest regards -
Jennifer
Antioch, IL
Date: 15 Apr 2015 2:15 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
I'm sitting here, shaking my head...NO!...please! This can not be the end to this story...I will keep my fingers cross.....would like Luke's pov. Has to be more then a look for both. I like Sevenina, she's more interesting.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2015 6:23 PM Title: Confession and Inspection
Oh please don't leave us dangling and update your delicious story which makes me hungry for more.
Date: 19 Mar 2015 2:21 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
I've been missing this story. It really is too good to be forgotten. I hope you will be able to update soon. Thanks
Date: 15 Jan 2015 11:36 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
No way is he mad at her. She did exactly as she was required and disclosed immediately upon return.
nice chapt but too short. :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2015 2:18 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
Love your story and so glad you are back at it!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 10:09 PM Title: The Arrangement
I discovered your story yesterday, and read straight through all of the chapters available. Really love your storytelling. Severine has a most compelling personality, and if I didn't know Christian's history, I would think she would be a "keeper" for him. So looking forward to Carl meeting a real Dom. And so torn between her staying with Christian and developing things with Luke. Great job - thank you for sharing with us!!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 1:13 PM Title: Confession and Inspection
Can't wait for the playroom scene.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2015 1:11 PM Title: Confession and Inspection
Ahh, a cliffhanger. I wish that she had called Master and told him herself. However, I realize that that is not your story. I love it so much, I forget Christian is not suppose to end up with Severine. I can't wait for the next one!!
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:18 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
So happy to see this new chapter! Can't wait to see what Christian has in store for her when she arrives to Escala.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:43 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
Glad you have continued this story. I have been checking frequently. Only wish there had been more to read after your long hiatus. Thank you for continuing. I only hope christian believes her explanation.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:25 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
Welcome back! Have been missing this story. Hoping Christian finds out everything and does what he does best in regard to Carl.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 7:44 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
It was so nice to get a new chapter. Thank you, you were missed.
master is not going to be happy. It will be an interesting visit when Carl shows up. I think he will learn a valuable lesson. Lol.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 6:24 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
Yay been waitin for this to update. Cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2015 5:07 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
I love your style of writing and are so glad you have been able to update this fascinating story. Please continue.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:01 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
Welcome back!
Oh, I cannot wait until Luke and Master find out about Carl. He just thinks he wants to go to Seattle!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:53 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
i wood let grey deal with him
Date: 09 Jan 2015 12:00 PM Title: Sleepy to Seattle
Thank you for getting back to this story. I enjoy reading it very much and appreciate your words
Date: 02 Nov 2014 4:53 PM Title: Never, Ever
I hope that you wil update soon, can't wait to read the rest of this story!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 8:10 PM Title: Never, Ever
Really enjoying this story, please update.
Date: 14 Oct 2014 4:13 PM Title: Never, Ever
Looking forward to more. Thank you for this story.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:48 AM Title: Never, Ever
You go girl!!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:08 PM Title: Never, Ever
Glad she Claude's teachings.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2014 2:20 PM Title: Never, Ever
i hate men like that one
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:43 PM Title: The Wisdom of Our Elders
Can't wait to read more of this story
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:46 PM Title: The Wisdom of Our Elders
wow one hell of a vacation i what one
Date: 22 Sep 2014 2:27 PM Title: The Wisdom of Our Elders
Well, idk how this will play out. We know Luke is with Christian when Ana is there. But I want Serverine to take Luke back home to the bayou with her. Hmmm. I can't wait to see what you come up with. Also can't wait to read what happens Tuesday at 5:30!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:15 PM Title: The Wisdom of Our Elders
Hmm. Is meeting the ex pivotal?
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:59 PM Title: You Can Go Home Again
Just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story. You are doing a great job at keeping the story interesting with twists and unexpected turns. It is always well written and as a reader I appreciate the regular updates. I especially like the rap pour between the two of them and the mature relationship they have. You have limited the story to only a few of the original characters in the book making their time more intimate and each of their lives more separate and making for a interesting read. Can't help but wonder though what might happen if a chance meeting between Mia or Elliot might bring. Good work.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 2:32 AM Title: You Can Go Home Again
Love is story, keep up the good work!
Date: 18 Sep 2014 12:47 AM Title: You Can Go Home Again
I fear we are coming to an end.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2014 7:33 PM Title: You Can Go Home Again
great ch keep comminig
Date: 17 Sep 2014 6:39 PM Title: You Can Go Home Again
I know it's your story, but I sure am sad all those sessions in the playroom were just mentioned in passing and not detailed. ;)
Date: 17 Sep 2014 6:09 PM Title: Après Dinner
I agree, with another reviewer, it would be nice to have Christians point of view of this sub and what he feels about her. Why did he choose a scene that gave him a romantic setting - almost like craves it but can't give in to those feelings? Also, why doesn't he kiss her very often. What is he thinking about their arrangement as far as extending the duration? He gives her pleasure multiple times and only one for himself in this scene - does he derive pleasure from her pleasure? Or is this a way of giving of himself ewe. He can't give himself emotionally?
Date: 07 Sep 2014 5:04 PM Title: Après Dinner
Would be interesting to have CPOV. Love to know what he thinks.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2014 3:24 PM Title: Après Dinner
hot ch and just wow
Date: 07 Sep 2014 1:18 PM Title: Après Dinner
Loved it! More!
However, I still don't think this Dom provides enough aftercare-even though he did do some after this scene.
Date: 07 Sep 2014 10:52 AM Title: The Way You Look Tonight
Very nice!
Date: 04 Sep 2014 2:00 AM Title: The Way You Look Tonight
She's had a good week. Still don't like Christian being nice/sweet with his subs. But, I do like the content of the story. And, hiw well written it is.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 12:17 AM Title: The Way You Look Tonight
Cannot wait to see what the rest of the evening holds for these two!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2014 5:08 PM Title: The Way You Look Tonight
wow great ch
Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:03 PM Title: Ups and Downs
I'm thinking she will end the contract just not sure when.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:29 PM Title: Ups and Downs
Just found this story and unable to put it down for 23 chapters and can't wait for more.
l really like your style of writing and differant perspective on our favourite story. Thankyou.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:18 PM Title: Ups and Downs
i don't think i could eat ether lol great ch
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:27 AM Title: My Month in Review
I love this story. I'm often checking for the next chapter. Please write soon!
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:38 PM Title: My Month in Review
Eating his complete diner off of her stomach, not quite as sensual as chocolate and cream. What is coming next, the pudding I am looking forward to this and I am sure Teebs is too.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:57 PM Title: My Month in Review
Different! I am missing the playroom as much as Severine.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:48 PM Title: My Month in Review
great ch
Date: 24 Aug 2014 10:46 AM Title: Ta Kill Ya
Teebs so respects the contract I really like her, I hope Mr power CG does not cancel the contract; I would love to see him jealous of Luke if something develops there....
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:52 PM Title: The Arrangement
I really like this story line. I love to read about what Christian might have been like pre-Ana. Well done on the writing!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2014 6:17 AM Title: Ta Kill Ya
Love this story, especially the potential romance between Luke & Severine!
Date: 18 Aug 2014 2:32 PM Title: Ta Kill Ya
I really hope you post the next one soon and he does not end her contract. They haven't really developed their arrangement very far and I think so much more can take place. She is smart and does give Christian more than just sexual pleasure. I think he is monitoring her internet access and knows she wants to go to NOLA.
Date: 17 Aug 2014 10:39 PM Title: Ta Kill Ya
Uh oh. I think he is going to end the contract??
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 5:06 PM Title: Punishment Redux
great job with the ch
Date: 09 Aug 2014 2:09 PM Title: Punishment Redux
Is he aware of the situ with Luke.... Not sure about his current activities and way with Serivine, I like her and she needs better?
Date: 09 Aug 2014 1:29 PM Title: Punishment Redux
Yeah, don't know how she will be able to sit for an exam the next day. 15 with a can? RED!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2014 3:29 AM Title: Sushi Schoolwork Security
Sev's got a love interest brewing!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 12:20 PM Title: Sushi Schoolwork Security
Well, of course I love an HEA, but I also love her time with Christian!!
Date: 08 Aug 2014 11:05 AM Title: Sushi Schoolwork Security
Very interesting????
Date: 06 Aug 2014 1:58 AM Title: Piano Works
Holy hell! Of course only Christian could make piano-sex hot!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 11:33 PM Title: Piano Works
Humm. I'm really enjoying this dom/sub story. But, I also love FSOG so I hate seeing Christian with others... when he is being compassionate. In the FSOG books he always seemed so cold with others and when talking about his previous subs. I don't want him to be compassionate, caring and sweet with them. I hated he took Severine on the piano. That was supposed to be only Ana.
There, I got my rant out. Sorry.... My issues.
i am very much enjoying your work!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 6:22 AM Title: Piano Works
Great story! I can't wait for more! Please write again soon!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 9:08 PM Title: Piano Works
oh no she going to get a spanking again lol
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:16 PM Title: Piano Works
I too love seeing an update to this story. The piano scene, so hot I can just imagine that sky line..... Next chapter please now!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:06 PM Title: Piano Works
I'm always excited when I see an update to this story in my mailbox. Your writing is clear and precise. The scenes are beautifully told. And really really hot!! Thanks
Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:53 AM Title: Merlot and Club Soda
I like this little possible flame between Luke & Severine.... Interesting. Loving your story!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 11:00 AM Title: Merlot and Club Soda
Huh, a budding romance with Luke and a sub? Oh, yeah-she's gonna be in Trouble for not mentioning this sooner.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 4:35 AM Title: Will It Ever End?
Such a great story! I really enjoy it. Please keep writing!
Date: 29 Jul 2014 5:57 AM Title: Will It Ever End?
I am glad he did not end it, they are so good together. Really enjoyed it as usual but would love to have more to read sooner!