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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this Edward and that he wasn't all emo and forelorn about being a vamp.   They did what they both desired with no doubts and no changes expected to anyone's personalities.    I would love to read more about how they go after Jacob and other criminals.   Maybe we can see Alice find her mate as well.   :)

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was so good.  Thank you! 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this one shot.  I would love to read about a sexy, duo who takes out sleazy criminals (esp Jacob) together.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

super cool twisty o/s ;) i really hope you do come back to make this a multi chapter story ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2015 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

The power Bella generated to shove Jacob away from her must be the enhanced one after her change. She and Edward are going to be the crime fighting team of the ages once they get organized! Neat idea and one that sure would be a great extended story!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is fantastic

looking forward to when you expand this story

well done

putting you on author alert

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully done.  Love the subtle changes you did.  This could be developed into additional chapters, and I would love to read them.  Exceptionally well written.

 

5 Stars.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  I really liked this and hope you decide to continue it!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Adding this to favs, want to see how this continues.

Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you I enjoyed this very much. Short to the point, strong Edward, no compliate Bella trying to make everyone happy. Great plot/story line.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

GReat story!!! :)

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was really good. I found it on FB! Thank you for sharing! :)

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked this story very much and I hope you will continue it. I'm very curious about what they are going to do with Jacob and meeting Carlisle. And also Alice, of course. Will she get to find Jasper?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

nice story, leaves you wanting more.

Reviewer: Meeper Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was a great story I'm looking forward to you

making it a full story from a one shot. I like that Bella didn't automatically forgive Jacob 

or make excuses for what he did. I felt like she did that all the time in the book, whatever he did to her or said to her and Edward was ok because she felt guilt from Jacob because she chose Edward. 

I hope you write about them hunting down people who are hurting others and what happens when they next meet up with Jacob. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) I hope you continue this

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was really good.  Such a shame its only a one-shot.  I would gladly read more of this.  Thank you for sharing your talent.

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