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Reviewer: ajhale Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2019 4:34 AM Title: Not a Chapter...Sorry just an A/N

Ahhh! I hope you'll update this soon. I know it's been a couple years and I hope that things now are better. I hope you'll continue this, it's one of the longer ones I've seen so far and I'm loving it. 

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 11:30 PM Title: Not a Chapter...Sorry just an A/N

Sorry you have had such a rough year and a half.  That really sucks.  I look forward to your updates (hopefully)!! I really love this story!

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:40 PM Title: Not a Chapter...Sorry just an A/N

Wow sorry for everything you have to gone throug... best wishes

Reviewer: indian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2016 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 24

anxiously waiting for the next chapter

Reviewer: babygirl92866 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love your story hope to read more soon

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love this story.  I hope you update soon!!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loving it!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 21

Far out I hope J kicks Ms Rottencrotch to the kirb. I hope B will be ok. Great story so more please. Chop chop get back to writting so I can have more story. 😁

XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love it!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

Amazing chapter as per your usual.  I hope your writer's block is gone for good...at least for a while.  I missed this story.  Cannot wait to see what happens because I have a feeling Char and Peter are not going to be able to keep Jasper from finding out Bella is staying the night.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 19

Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaase update soon!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 11

I hope you update again soon!  I love this story, and I can't wait to see where it ends up.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

Wonder what Tanya thinks telling Bella's story will do... I mean any normal person would feel sorry for Bella at a minimum.  I guess we'll find out later. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! And she was just trying to be a catty b!+@# nothing more wanting to try to make Bella out to be a liar and whore, which Alice will buy hook, line and sinker but no one else.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh that girl needs to be gone yesterday!  She's trouble waiting to happen!  Lots of lovely angst here. - great stuff!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! She is trouble waiting to happen and I have a feeling it will be happening LOL 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love it! What a cluster f**k. I wouldn't want to be Edward or Bella at the moment.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Yeah it's a cluster f**k right now but it will work out for both of them ;) 

Reviewer: smiling_in_pink Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

Im not a fan of edward but this one is so sweet and jasper is mean and I just cant wait for edward to have his happy ending



Author's Response:

Thank you! I have gotten a lot of comments about this Edward!  Jasper will get his head out of his rear end and turn into the nice guy and Edward will get his happy ending too!! 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

And damn!  She never even got her tea!  Seriously though, this was a wonderful emotional chapter.  Bella's head is going one way and her pain and heart want her to go the other way.  I think they need one another a lot!  As for Jasper, if my fiancé was that devious, sneaky and flat out illegal (going through patient files etc.) I could not marry him!  No matter what anyone said or did.  I love this piece because truth be told, the world is filled with BEllas, Jaspers, Edwards, Alices, and Tanyas.  You bring the world into focus!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

What a great review! Thank you so much. And no she never got her tea!  Haha! It will take Bella a little while but she will get her head and her heart in agreement.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

You have to love a man who will take you away from your troubles for tea!  A man after my own heart!  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! And yes Jasper may not always get it right but he is out to protect Bella as best as he can. 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I am so glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

Tanya hearing isn't so good for Edward's divorce... but then again she has also been cheating he just needs proof. 

Jasper should just leave Alice already. Doesn't seem like he loves her that much to begin with.

 



Author's Response:

She has been cheating on Edward, but she would never admit to doing anything wrong...it's all on Edward! Jasper doesn't love Alice that much, but their relationship is what he is used to, it's what is expected of him and it's an awful big change that he doesn't know if he needs/wants to make because it will be such an upheaval of...everything.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

Aah gossip!  Ain't it grand?!  Poor Jasper has it bad though!  Wonderful story!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  Yes, you gotta love gossip! LOL  Jasper does have it bad, he will figure it all out...eventually ;)

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love it! 

Personally I wouldn't be marrying someone I can't stand or is hiding something from them... 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I couldn't marry someone like that either...and neither can Jasper. He just has to figure that out for himself first! HAHA

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 7

Well Jasper just like Mr Adkins you need to make a choice too!

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

EXACTLY!! It's not that hard to figure out! LOL  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

My what a loving couple!  Marvelous fiction, by the way!  The emotional angst is multi-dimensional.  I look forward to finding out more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I am so glad you like it!!

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