Date: 09 Jan 2020 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope you continue, I really like the story so far
Date: 16 Jan 2018 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Cliffhanger This is definitely different and I am liking it.
Date: 11 Aug 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Read this intriguing story on FFn a while back. Not usually interested in sci-fi, but your story hooked me. Really wish you'd continue by posting additional chapters. It's been a while, so please don't abandon or neglect it.
Date: 18 Dec 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it update soon
Date: 16 Oct 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is so interesting!! I can't wait to read the rest!
Date: 04 Sep 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Interesting. Waiting for more.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
It is a really good mystery. Keep up the great work.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Naughty Sanitago. hmmm wonder what B will say now.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmm Naughty Bella sneaking around behind Charlie's back. LOl
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm now this is a bit odd. A purple snake and 5 vampire like creatures? Interesting though
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm now how did charlie win these tickets I wonder. Ship sounds quite nice.
Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Love that Charlie is getting to do something besides fish, drink beer and watch TV (outside of work).
Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
It's hard to tell where ur going with this one however I'm enjoying the change until next updates
Date: 09 Aug 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I really luke this story, its very intreging. I would love to read more.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear you liked it. Thank you for taking your time to read and review, and extra thank you for being first person to review this story here :)