Date: 07 Apr 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hi all your "DMV" need to be changed to DVM for degree to make sense
It's Doctorates of Veterinary Medicine
Date: 09 Nov 2016 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
YAY!!!!!!! THEY FINALLY KISSED
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved this story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2016 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
I don't care about what anyone else says, you ladies made the right choice regarding lemons in this story. It's a great story without them. Lemons are fun and sexy, but you know you can write well when you don't HAVE to put them in and the story is great anyway. Lemons are and should always be a bonus to a great storyline and you girls are the queens of great stories. Thank you.
Date: 19 Nov 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
amazing story as always from you ;) thanks for shaing it on here for us ;D
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
27*17 big age difference
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
she is sfraid of her father and knows to keep secrets Peter may not be old enough and she doesn't want them getting in trouble-my guess
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
a great start
Date: 07 Feb 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Finally got around to reading your lovely story - so glad I did. It was truly touching.
Well done and thank you both !
Date: 15 Sep 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 33
As always, ladies, you have hit another homerun! This was such a good story, even with evil Charlie in it! I'm always up for a happy ending, and this surely had one! I hope it made a few folks think, too!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 32
Definitely a time to be thankful for Alice's premonitions, so Carlisle and Jasper showed up in the nick of time! Of course they would name their son Anthony, what else?
Date: 15 Sep 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
That was cute that Peter asked God's blessings on the babies and didn't know his sister was going to have one! Guess Newton's been busy, too!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
It sounds like a lovely wedding, a nice reception and the toasts were very moving. Had to chuckle at Bella's dismay over falling asleep on her wedding night!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
It's going to be so great for Peter to be adopted and Bella and Edward to be married, so all of them have the same last name! I had to laugh at Jasper and Alice catching what for from her parents! Bella selling Leah and Jacob the house was so nice and the town thought so too!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
What a wonderful way and place to propose! Makes me want to go to their wedding!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
That was a fabulous first date, just from what they said to each other, so beautiful!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
That's just Bella being Bella. With those six children, the house will be ideal. Now that Jasper and Alice are a couple and Bella and Edward are, it will be nice for them to hang out together!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
It's a very sad thing for any woman but especially for a teenager like Jessica was! Cancer is nasty, if it doesn't take your life, it can sometimes take your dreams. I'm so happy that Edward and Bella have declared their love for each other!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
Lord, that poor child, to have gone through all that, and at such a vulnerable age, too! Still thinking evil thoughts about Charlie, the bastard! He must have been insane! Glad Bella talked it all out with Edward!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Mr. Oblivious where it comes to his siter, I guess! Watching Edward and Bella growing closer is just lovely!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
Peter has already had a grandpa dream, as I recall, so Bella probably will also. Thenm spending the whole summer on the ranch, together should do the trick!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
Jessica sounds silly and flirty but so far, not mean. Those lost in each other feelings kind of scared them both!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
It pinches your throat, just a bit, to hear what Bella and Peter have never done, like decorating a tree, sledding or making snow angels. Makes me want to dig up Charlie and kill him again!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
I sure hope you guys didn't get a bunch of flak for having no lemons. It wouldn't have served this story at all. It is, however, quite nice to watch developments as they occur!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Makes me curious why building a relationship with Bella would make him uncomfgortable? I guess he may have some leftover thought about her youth. I think he better get over that!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Now all he has to do is fend off Jessica and worry about Bella finding a boy her own age at college!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm guessing Alice has met Jasper, and they are together. I hope so, anyway. Bringing Bella back to the ranch was a very good call.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Just as Esme said, Bella will have those bumps in the road to recovery and it looks like this is another one! Edward is racing to be there to hold her when she needs him, and she will!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
I almost hope those men Angela threatened Bella with would show up, so Edward and Jasper and maybe Jacob could deal with them. Bet they wouldn't ever sho0w up again! I hope this is the end of the official legal things, maybe now Bella and Peter can get on with their lives!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope someone got to kick that defense attorney in the balls, just sayin'! What kind of being does that to a child on the witness stand?
Date: 14 Sep 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
She's got a snarky mouth on her still, but that's to be expected, I suppose. It was kind of sadly funny that Bella thought Edward was comparing her story and Newton's !
Date: 14 Sep 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
I wasn't surprised they went to his parents, because they are his parents, and thus a link to Edward. It's good the boy is thriving and I'm sure Bella will eventually.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hope Charlie is in Hell, roasting slowly, right now! That was worse than a concentration camp in that house!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
They better not give that boy to social services, after Angela Weber colluded with Charlie to keep them in that hell! What a way to solve the problem, having a n ine yearold boy kill his father!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope he can keep his promise to Peter and Bella will be okay. Surely Grandpa Anthony wouldn't have lied to Peter in his dream!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
I wonder if Bella will regret being so ornery to Edward, now that she has finally driven him off? You have to be careful what you wish for in case you get it!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
My God, those poor children! Just about breaks my heart to even read about what they are going through!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Rose ought to be ashamed of herself, being jealous of a young battered girl like that! Im guess I can't blame Bella for her attitude, considering what she is undergoing!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
Now that Edward knows for a fact that Charlie is abusing his children, I hope there is something he can do to help them!
Date: 14 Sep 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
If Grandpa Anthony didn't care for their father, maybe that means there was something wrong between him and his children! It's too bad that Rose, Kate and Edward didn't lower their voices when talking about Bella and Peter.
Date: 14 Sep 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm betting the runaways were the ones at the cemetery. The girl is fiercely protective of the boy and has no trust that Edward won't hurt them!There is definitely something going on there.
Date: 13 Sep 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
If there was a Spearhead, it would fit right in with other oddly named towns in Montana!
Date: 16 Jul 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 33
Like your story. I missed the lemons, but still a good story. Thank you for writing and posting this.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh what an awesome story and ending so sad in parts I was crying. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great story, hard to read at times but very enjoyable, thank you both.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 33
such a happy ending
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 33
Awesome job! Loved it:)
Date: 30 Jun 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wonder followup to the story. Love that Peter is going to be a doctor. Ty ladies for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 33
I loved it so great they have grown in more than one way they are all happier stronger and more full of life it was beautiful thank you
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 33
I loved this story. Thanks.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 33
This story was so touching and the way you handled it all the way through was very moving. Thanks for much for sharing it with us.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 33
Thoroughly enjoyed this story
Date: 30 Jun 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 33
that was one of the best story's I have read in a long time I loved it. Thanks so much
Date: 29 Jun 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great story loved it!! :D
Date: 29 Jun 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wonderful story! Great job.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
He is just a VET she says that a lot lol.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
I love it peaches is pregers lol. Bella is so cute worrying about Alice she is going to be such a great mother.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved loved loved this whole story! !!!!! A amazing job writing it. Love how everyone pulls together.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
I don't know how you guys just keep writing so much. Where do your ideas come from???? I loved how you had Jessica meet Michael after she loses Molly and finally get a child and husband. Thanks for a very great story - Xanath
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 33
Really nice story thank you soooo much!!! Loved all of the characters!!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for sharing your beautiful story. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thanks for this story. I enjoyed it very much
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2014 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 33
Aww, I hate to see it end. Was a hard story to get through at times but yall did a great job guiding us.
Love your stories and can't wait to see what you've got coming to us. Thank you so much for sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 33
loved this story
Date: 29 Jun 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love this chapter :)
Date: 29 Jun 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
lol for Edward and his cow gloves.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
I loved it he saw what grandpa showed him and he couldn't be happier and Bella is still stubborn hehehehehehe and now have a boy but how his dad know to come did they take to long
Date: 28 Jun 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love that Edward got to deliver his child. I just knew they would have a boy and name it after Edward's grandfather. I am thinking that if they ever have a girl they will name her after Bella's mama. Love this chapter.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for writing this thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining story!
Date: 28 Jun 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
you are right this story did not need lemons. the way you did the the honeymoon was very tasteful and respectful of the type of relationship that bella and edward have. if people want lemons there are plenty of stories out there that they can read.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
I am glad that is light in the lemonade department. With the hell that Bella went through.. that would be just...wrong..
Loved it and looking forward to more :)
Date: 28 Jun 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 31
The story is so good. We didn't need lemons, Their honeymoon should be private. It was more about the joining of souls.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
Awesome! Babies
Date: 28 Jun 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved this chapter. Your lemons ate just fine. To be honest I am having problems thinking of this Edward and Bella having graphic sex. Lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 31
You're right there was no need for graphic sex.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved it so sweet man is Edward romantic hehehe and a baby and puppies what a full house they will have hehebe update soon
Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think it's just perfect the way it is. The love they share is enough to enjoy it.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm one of those who was hoping for a lemon. I guess I figured that with all the graphic abuse detailed early in the story that a bit of love would help offset it. I'm mildly disappointed that violence was depicted here and love was not.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
woo hoo for baby news.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
Sometimes ther is too much graphic. This is good.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
What a fairy tail wedding . Peter is an amazing boy so sweet and so full of wisdom.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 30
How funny and what a beautiful wedding so sweet and peter knows just how to tug on your heart strings update soon